Title: About Leonardo da vinci
Leo borned in 1452. He lived in Italy. He was an artist, an inventor, a mathematician, a scientist, and a psychologist. He drew 'MonaLisa' and 'the Last supper.' And he invented an airplane, a helicopter and lots of farming muchines and weapons. why aren't a person like Leo today? Long time ago, there wasn't computer and internet games. But, today lots of students play computer games or internet. I want students don't play and study hard and become a famous person like Leo.
Incidentally, I'm super-impressed by Ann's writing. To show you the contrast, here's the picture diary of one of her classmates:
Title: Today teacher give test paper.
Today teacher give test paper. The test is very difficult. I hundred is math and Korean. I don't like souial studies. Because It is very difficult. But science is commonness. In my class everyone didn't had a hundred.
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2 comments:
SO FREAKING CUTE!!! How old are these kids? And I TOTALLY agree with Ann - has she taught middle school chorus anytime recently? Because it sure sounds like she has. Like Ann, I just wish my kids could just invent muchines and be famous person.
Lori, you must be so proud to have reached her through a new language. Now, that's job satisfaction that is even better than cash! This had to be an AH-HA moment for you. Hugs, Sunshine
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